Date: 2006-01-15 11:53 am (UTC)
pensnest: bright-eyed baby me (Default)
From: [personal profile] pensnest
Poor Johanna, orphaned and uprooted and not allowed to play. Atmospheric as always.

One tiny little quibble: "Shall we go eat?" doesn't sound quite right to me. "Shall we eat?" would be better.
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